Intro membutuhkan alur logis yang lebih baik

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Paragraf 1–2 sebagian besar mengulangi poin yang sama (merek untung; pekerja rugi). Aliran kemudian melompat antara tenaga kerja dan iklim tanpa menyatakan mekanismenya. Tambahkan tulang punggung yang jelas: model yang sama—kelebihan produksi, tekanan harga, risiko outsourcing—mendorong eksploitasi dan polusi; upah rendah dan hak yang lemah membuat guncangan iklim memukul pekerja paling keras; kemudian transisi adil yang dipimpin pekerja mengikuti.

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Intro membutuhkan alur logis yang lebih baik

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